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Guess Not
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I'm wondering,
Did you know how much I really loved you?
How I would've dropped everything for you?
That you were all I wanted?
Guess not.
I'm wondering,
Did you love me as you said you did?
Would you have given it all just to be with me?
Was it not everything that you wanted?
Guess not.
Do you care,
That I cry under the light of the moon?
Why I no longer crave to hold you in my hands?
How my soul has left in shame of the love we shared?
Guess not.
All that I did for you and you really didn't care?
Guess not.
Did you know how much I really loved you?
How I would've dropped everything for you?
That you were all I wanted?
Guess not.
I'm wondering,
Did you love me as you said you did?
Would you have given it all just to be with me?
Was it not everything that you wanted?
Guess not.
Do you care,
That I cry under the light of the moon?
Why I no longer crave to hold you in my hands?
How my soul has left in shame of the love we shared?
Guess not.
All that I did for you and you really didn't care?
Guess not.
I honestly guess not about Jonathan. That's really too bad, but he brings me great poetry as I've been told.
© 2005 - 2024 Jhessimer
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The emotions and message are so clear. You have done an outstanding job of putting into words a feeling that I could hardly discribe. I love the fairly strict meter to this, every stanza hits like a bullet.